Care to share muse?
Can I be the one
Wrapped
In a petroleum blanket
of Flames
Your loneliness
makes me
Sweat
When all I can
do
is bleed
Breathe
Scorching
the cinder path
As ebony teeth
loosen
And I tear
Yellowed nicotine stained
fingernails
from the roots
of
extended
Talon’d fingers
tattoo’d
in Swirls
Living life
comforted in
strangers
Drink in
Eclectic
electric
cognitive realities distort
perceived
blurring in visions
through the eyes
coloured in waves
of the
ocean
And I
breathe
And I
bleed
And I
scream
6 comments:
wow...strong...the fingernail part is esp. well textured...and then the closure...
And I
breathe
And I
bleed
And I
scream.... oh i know how this feels...
good job adrian
Wracked with emotion, but tightly structured--loved the end especially
Your words call forth many demons and angels at the same time...they balance this journey of life in myriad forms, as always good sir, a pleasure xoxo
dang...very visceral pain in this...when all is over come and all we have left is to breathe and bleed and ache...felt piece man....
The staccato lines and wrenching emotion you're trying to convey are vaguely reminiscent of Alan Ginsberg's inimitable 'Howl'.
The staccato lines and wrenching emotion you're trying to convey are vaguely reminiscent of Alan Ginsberg's inimitable 'Howl'.
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